Friday, May 17, 2019

The Castle Creative Writing

I walked down the narrow, work lane on my trend to the park. I was meeting Summer, Leon and Tiffany. It was really cold and it was beginning to get dark. I felt nervous walking down the lane as there were no lights. Eventually I got to the end of the lane and as I turned the corner I could conceive the park in the distance. I could hear summer laughing like a hyena. I carried on walking.Leon was shining the glorious torch in my face. My eyes stung and I grabbed the torch from his plump, sticky hand. He grabbed it back memory it in one hand while holding a chocolate bar in the other.I explained why I was so late and asked what they were planning to do now that I had arrived.We go for salutary been playing dargons and Tiffany dared one of us to go in the castle up on the hill at Florences Gardens, but were all scared explained Summer. She continued, Why dont you go in there, Ryan?Ryan, look ever so slightly scared, refused outright reminding us of all the stories about that cas tle, especially the one about the boy who went in nearly twenty years ago and hitherto hasnt been found.Oh, theyre salutary myths and rumours, youre not telling me you actually believe them, are you? said Summer.Well if you dont believe them, then you go in there, as youre so sure theyre not true I shouted.Summers smile dropped which made me wonder if she might be beginning to regret what she had just said, but Summer isnt the type of person to back down from a dare so she replied, Fine, I will then. Ill prove to you its all lies.The castle was tall up on the hill overlooking unyielding stretches of green fields. The walls of the castle were jet black and looked dull and dreary. Some of the windows were smashed and through them it was possible to see a glimpse of the dirty looking rooms inside, which were covered in dust and cobwebs.We began to make our way up the hill. By now it was pitch black and we were all extremely cold. The wind was blowing and the leaves on the trees wer e rustling and the wind gushed past. I was starting to feel scared. I could sense a creepy atmosphere somewhat the castle it reminded me of something out of a scary movie. I was beginning to think that I would prefer to be back at home, snuggled up in bed with a warm cup of toothsome chocolate. I dont go through if the others felt the same but I definitely didnt want them to think I was scared so I just kept my feelings to myself and kept walking up the hill towards the castle. When we in the long run reached the huge wooden opening Leon turned to Summer and pointed at it.Go on then. If youre so die hard, you go in there and come back and tell us what you find.Ok, she utter. there was a slight sway in her vo chicken feed, even though on the outside she was trying to look confident. As she gently pushed the opening open, it creaked loudly. She turned back. Tiffany pushed her forward.Go on she shouted.Summer turned back and began to make her entrance into the castle. Leon, Tiffany and I looked at one another(prenominal). We stood in silence listening while we could hear Summers footsteps as she journeyed further into the castle. The footsteps faded and Tiffany began to laugh.I cant believe she is actually in there. I though that when we got here she would change her mindMe, too, agreed Leon.We sit down down on the damp grass and began to discuss what we all thought Summer would find in there. all(prenominal) caught up in our conversation, we didnt realise how long she had been gone when we heard a long, high toss scream. We all jumped up. Tiffany had a look of horror on her now pale face.Whats happened? Leon exclaimed.I began to shout Summers put up hoping, that she would shout back, laughing, saying she was winding us up, and just trying to scare us. But there was no reply.We should never have let her go in there. I began to say. I wonder if shes ok? unrivalled of us has to go in there, said Tiffany sternly. We have to go and rescue her. She is o bviously in trouble.Leon looked brave and agreed that he would go in and find Summer. I was extremely scared and nervous as I watched Leon go in the same door as Summer had gone in somewhat half an hour ago. But I knew we had to do something, we couldnt just leave Summer in there. I know it was selfish but at that moment I just thought how glad I was that it was Leon going into the castle and not me.The next 10 minutes passed. Nothing. Leon and Summer were now in the planetary house and neither Tiffany or I knew what was going on or if they were alright.Weve got to go in there whispered Tiffany.Give it another 5 minutes I began. But before I could even fill in my sentence, she was running towards the doors and into the castle. I hesitated. I was so nervous it was unbelievable. I was shaking I dont know whether it was because of the ice cold weather or because I was so scared, but I knew no matter how affright I was I had to go in there. I slowly pushed open the door and peeked inside. It was pitch black. All I could see were the flickering lights ahead at the end of the long straight corridor that I was approaching. I slowly and carefully made my way towards the light.When I finally arrived at the end of the creepy corridor I was faced with two doors. One on my right and the other on the left. I went with my first instinct and choose the door on my right. I quietly pushed the door open and stepped through. It was another long corridor. There were cobwebs all over the place. Dust covered the dirty walls and carpet. I walked down the second corridor.Palms sweating with the alarm of not knowing if I was going to get out of this castle alive. But I knew I couldnt go back now and I just had to keep walking. I must have whole been walking for a minute or so, but it seemed like forever, when I caught a glimpse of another door ahead. As I approached it, so many thoughts were running through my head of what could be tail it. I hesitated for a second, then reac hed out to the door and pushed it hard. I was shocked when I saw nefariousness and felt a bitter cold come over me. I was in the outside introduction again Suddenly, I heard a crash as the door slammed loudly behind me. I turned around and it was then I noticed that I was stand right where I was standing before I went in the castle and the door I came out of was the door I went in.I felt relieved and safe but then it dawned on me that I was alone. I still didnt know where the others were. They werent anywhere around. I thought for a moment and came to the conclusion that they must still be in the house. Then I remembered there had been 2 doors when I had come to the end of the first corridor.They must have gone into the door on the left whereas I had chosen the door on the right. I had to go back and go through the door and try and find them, but as I tugged on the door handle to enter the castle for the second time something was wrong. The door was jammed. I pulled harder and ha rder on the door handle but it wouldnt budge. Its now a week on and I havent seen my friends since. I hate thought that they are going to be stuck in that castle for the rest of there lives if they even are still alive.

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